Only thing i know is that he was active on his discord until about a month or 2 ago and then suddenly went silent. No one has heard from him since that point. People are starting to assume he is dead at this point, and while I hope not, it is entirely possible.
Turns out he is still alive. He recently posted on his discord server to let people know he was. He is just dealing with some health issues and having changed done to meds.
Just a heads up, this game will be on hiatus for around 5 months. I need proper preparation for the upcoming exam on October. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Rest assured that I, the developer, will update the game as soon as I finish the exam.
SO COOL!!! Can't wait for the new update! Tho sorry, I don't have any virtual currency and I don't have any GAY friends... So I can't support much. But, I hope this project will become a success!
I suspect the Author of this VN is a Filipino... Hmm the name of the spark is very pinoy. Hhhha.. And i like your VN very much.. Now i add this one of my favorite VN. 😘😘
SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH BUT OMAAAYYGOOSHH I JUST WANNA SAY I JUST FINISHED READING YOUR AMAAAZIING VN AND LET ME TELL YOUUU IT DID NOT DISAPPOINT ME AT ALLL EVEN JUST BY THE PROLOGUE I ALREADY FELL INLOVE WITH YOUR WORK ESPECIALLY GOERGE,FORT,THARSUS AND TERRRRYYYY DID I FORGOT TO MENTION TERRYY OH I THINK I FORGOT TO MENTION TERRYY HOW COULD I FORGOT TERRYY OHH NEVERMIND I DID MENTION TERRY SILLY ME BUT TERRYY THO.... NOW WHERE WAS I OHH YAHH SINCE IM BROKE ASF ATM I'VE ALSO SHARED THIS TO MY FRIENDS ITS THE LEAST I COULD DO FOR SUPPOORRRRTIING YOUR AMAAZING,SLAAAYIING,FABULOUS VNNN <3 <3!!!!!!!
Just a little bit of spoiler, all characters will have their own dedicated chapter. You'll see their backstories and how they cope up with it. As such, you should pick up the route where it will lead to a romantic cut scene.
Interesting concept, I don't think I've heard of chapter routes before... I guess we will have to see how it pans out, I'm certainly looking forward to it! :)
Can we get your authorization to translate this game? Because we played this game and thought the game is good. So we want to translate this game into Chinese. Waiting for your response.
By the way, if I have something wrong, please forgive me.
Hi, just downloaded for MAC but the files dont work. Ive seen this happen with a few VN when they have a zip file together with windows, they never seem to work.
Dont know if anyone has had this issue? Only works when i see a separate download file for a MAC.
So, let me start by saying that I see potential in this project. I am going to try to offer some constructive criticism, especially because I know this is still early and it's definitely not easy to make a VN. So, I hope this is taken in good faith, as I really want to see this thing succeed.
First off, I noticed someone below commenting on a grammar pass. I agree with this, and particularly want to highlight the fact that the vast majority of sentences don't have any periods to end them.
More than that, though, I think that a lot of the text feels unnatural. There isn't a better way for me to explain this, other than to say that it feels like a lot of the dialogue was written by someone who does not use English as their primary language. I don't know if that's true or not, but having someone recite the lines aloud and seeing when the dialogue sounds awkward would probably help a lot.
Something else that might help with this: don't be afraid to combine multiple sentences into a single text box. There are a lot of instances where multiple lines are delivered by the same person (whether it be a character or the narrator) but they're divided up into multiple boxes. Sometimes this is good artistically when a character has a significant pause or something, but in casual conversation it just makes their conversation come off as choppy.
Last point I'll make on this is the introduction of the pandemic. I get it's obviously inspired by the recent Covid 19 pandemic, but in the novel it's not explained and appears to come out of nowhere. It might help to, for example, have a conversation with Terry on the first day, where he comments on the news of the new disease reaching their country. Then you can follow that up with everything closing down a couple days later.
I hope this isn't taken as entirely negative. Like I said, I see potential in this and just am offering some advice. On more positive notes, I do like several of the characters (Terry in particular is great) and the more fantastical elements definitely caught my attention. I am interested in seeing how this develops, and I hope this one improves and takes off.
Hi there, I will update the game probably next month. It's gonna be a huge update since I didn't update it this month. I hope you all forgive me for this is so sudden. As for now, just drink a cup of coffee and chillax.
I did add some dreamy effect in the real world. The game is still a prototype wherein it is just a rough model to help me determine what to improve and fix in my design. I'll change it next time. How was your game experience? I think you played on android. The font is not yet updated there so there could be a lot of errors. I'll try to change it too as soon as possible. Sorry to disappoint you.
Thanks for answering, I am playing on PC actually, the all uppercase letter is a bit difficult to read so I change them into the other system default font (Press "A" in the game).
It's not bad, I have no negative feeling. The flow has no abrupt, however the links in between could be smoother, for example, no need to back home between each hang out.
Story hasn't unfold so I have not much to comment at the moment.
I think it has potential, but it clearly needs a lot of work in multiple areas. Some of the character's poses (Fort's especially) are a bit awkward, and the grammar could have some revising to make it clearer. Of course, considering this appears to be a small project and in its infancy things like this are to be expected, so don't take my criticisms too harshly. I eagerly await the next update.
Probably next month. I have a training for this month and it's really hard for me to do everything in the game but I will try my best. I'm glad you liked the game.
rizal park is from the philippines how did you know that location and i hope you can take to making this visual novel game i really want to know what happened next it's gonna intriguing
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just asking but when we have to call out the name of the fog-ghost person do we say Cirrotaros or Atlas?
its altas
ohhhhhhh THNAKS
np :D
Im stuck on the whats his name boss battle thing in chapter 1, what is his name
May you rest in peach😔
What happened now?
I checked the accounts and I still do not get it.
Only thing i know is that he was active on his discord until about a month or 2 ago and then suddenly went silent. No one has heard from him since that point. People are starting to assume he is dead at this point, and while I hope not, it is entirely possible.
I see.
Thank you for sharing.
Turns out he is still alive. He recently posted on his discord server to let people know he was. He is just dealing with some health issues and having changed done to meds.
Ok, but it is still going to take a while when he comes back, especially for a recent announcement.
Glad he is okay, though.
Abandoned game?
i dont think so 'cause they took 1 year for only 1 chapter
sis ano na?
gonna stay up the rest of the night playing this be back in a bit
really good but did not finish
will there be a linux Version?
I'm gonna assume there won't be any nsfw in this game ?
I'm waiting
Eu queria saber pq o personagem que nos jogamos e humano
É uma prerrogativa da história. Têm alguns assim
how can i add it to collection?(￣ヘ￣;)
Just add it? Maybe it's just a bug. You could try refreshing
Just a heads up, this game will be on hiatus for around 5 months. I need proper preparation for the upcoming exam on October. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Rest assured that I, the developer, will update the game as soon as I finish the exam.
k
May Atlas be with you XD
This give me morenatsu vibes, which I love
I'ma give it a try :3
i'm fucking in love with this one.
SO COOL!!! Can't wait for the new update! Tho sorry, I don't have any virtual currency and I don't have any GAY friends... So I can't support much. But, I hope this project will become a success!
(Sorry for my poor English by the way)
I'm stuck I need help
Type in atlas. You are close to the end.
thank you
I’m sure he said to remember him, yet you forgot him. Wow…
i was all in for the hot furry men and the story
Your not the only one.
Will there be a MAC version?
Oh yea, the MAC version is out now. Try it out
I suspect the Author of this VN is a Filipino... Hmm the name of the spark is very pinoy. Hhhha.. And i like your VN very much.. Now i add this one of my favorite VN. 😘😘
Is it really that obvious? Anyway, I'm glad you liked the game!
its really obvious.. 😄
SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH BUT OMAAAYYGOOSHH I JUST WANNA SAY I JUST FINISHED READING YOUR AMAAAZIING VN AND LET ME TELL YOUUU IT DID NOT DISAPPOINT ME AT ALLL EVEN JUST BY THE PROLOGUE I ALREADY FELL INLOVE WITH YOUR WORK ESPECIALLY GOERGE,FORT,THARSUS AND TERRRRYYYY DID I FORGOT TO MENTION TERRYY OH I THINK I FORGOT TO MENTION TERRYY HOW COULD I FORGOT TERRYY OHH NEVERMIND I DID MENTION TERRY SILLY ME BUT TERRYY THO.... NOW WHERE WAS I OHH YAHH SINCE IM BROKE ASF ATM I'VE ALSO SHARED THIS TO MY FRIENDS ITS THE LEAST I COULD DO FOR SUPPOORRRRTIING YOUR AMAAZING,SLAAAYIING,FABULOUS VNNN <3 <3!!!!!!!
Just calm down. They are not going anywhere. Anyway, thank you for the support! I appreciate it.
oopss sorry my bad i was too excited didn`t even realise i was shouting on my comment XD .
mac version?
I don't really have a mac so I am not sure if it will work. If you want, you could dm me in discord and I'll let you try it.
I'm also interested in a Mac version, should I also DM you on Discord/Twitter?
Sure :)
It seems like I can't DM you on Twitter, does that mean you only accept DMs through Discord?
Oh, my bad. You can just DM me in discord. Thanks
Seems interesting, will back later!
ngl this game was so hilarious. 10/10 would play again ehe 🤭
Is there romance in this VN? Will we be able to get in a relationship with one of the guys?
It will be a singular route with a lot of endings. Romantic relationship will take place as the story progress.
Who will be the love interest, then?
Just a little bit of spoiler, all characters will have their own dedicated chapter. You'll see their backstories and how they cope up with it. As such, you should pick up the route where it will lead to a romantic cut scene.
Interesting concept, I don't think I've heard of chapter routes before... I guess we will have to see how it pans out, I'm certainly looking forward to it! :)
Sorry for bother you, Author.
Can we get your authorization to translate this game? Because we played this game and thought the game is good. So we want to translate this game into Chinese. Waiting for your response.
By the way, if I have something wrong, please forgive me.
I'll try to translate it to chinese. I hope it works.
We just translated it in private, Won't be official translation.
Okay then, have fun!
Thanks for agree us to translate.
Hi, just downloaded for MAC but the files dont work. Ive seen this happen with a few VN when they have a zip file together with windows, they never seem to work.
Dont know if anyone has had this issue? Only works when i see a separate download file for a MAC.
So, let me start by saying that I see potential in this project. I am going to try to offer some constructive criticism, especially because I know this is still early and it's definitely not easy to make a VN. So, I hope this is taken in good faith, as I really want to see this thing succeed.
First off, I noticed someone below commenting on a grammar pass. I agree with this, and particularly want to highlight the fact that the vast majority of sentences don't have any periods to end them.
More than that, though, I think that a lot of the text feels unnatural. There isn't a better way for me to explain this, other than to say that it feels like a lot of the dialogue was written by someone who does not use English as their primary language. I don't know if that's true or not, but having someone recite the lines aloud and seeing when the dialogue sounds awkward would probably help a lot.
Something else that might help with this: don't be afraid to combine multiple sentences into a single text box. There are a lot of instances where multiple lines are delivered by the same person (whether it be a character or the narrator) but they're divided up into multiple boxes. Sometimes this is good artistically when a character has a significant pause or something, but in casual conversation it just makes their conversation come off as choppy.
Last point I'll make on this is the introduction of the pandemic. I get it's obviously inspired by the recent Covid 19 pandemic, but in the novel it's not explained and appears to come out of nowhere. It might help to, for example, have a conversation with Terry on the first day, where he comments on the news of the new disease reaching their country. Then you can follow that up with everything closing down a couple days later.
I hope this isn't taken as entirely negative. Like I said, I see potential in this and just am offering some advice. On more positive notes, I do like several of the characters (Terry in particular is great) and the more fantastical elements definitely caught my attention. I am interested in seeing how this develops, and I hope this one improves and takes off.
noice
Is this game SFW, or can we count on NSFW goodness
Still SFW
update when?
Hi there, I will update the game probably next month. It's gonna be a huge update since I didn't update it this month. I hope you all forgive me for this is so sudden. As for now, just drink a cup of coffee and chillax.
I haven't played it yet but... I love the energy that emanates from that project ❤ can't wait to start it
It's still not done but I'm glad you like it
Why the color is so dreamy in the real world?
I did add some dreamy effect in the real world. The game is still a prototype wherein it is just a rough model to help me determine what to improve and fix in my design. I'll change it next time. How was your game experience? I think you played on android. The font is not yet updated there so there could be a lot of errors. I'll try to change it too as soon as possible. Sorry to disappoint you.
Thanks for answering, I am playing on PC actually, the all uppercase letter is a bit difficult to read so I change them into the other system default font (Press "A" in the game).
It's not bad, I have no negative feeling. The flow has no abrupt, however the links in between could be smoother, for example, no need to back home between each hang out.
Story hasn't unfold so I have not much to comment at the moment.
I'll polish the game with your suggestion. Thanks alot
Will this VN have NSFW content?
Probably in the Future
Btw I noticed some artistic discrepancies between the sprites, and I was wondering if they are all yours or if you were borrowing from other artists?
I have some friends who did it for me. Some are mine. But yeah, I'll put them in the credits next time. How was your game experience btw?
I think it has potential, but it clearly needs a lot of work in multiple areas. Some of the character's poses (Fort's especially) are a bit awkward, and the grammar could have some revising to make it clearer. Of course, considering this appears to be a small project and in its infancy things like this are to be expected, so don't take my criticisms too harshly. I eagerly await the next update.
I'll try my best. Have fun while waiting hahaha.
i wanna know whose the british wolf :'(
i love the game when next update :>
Probably next month. I have a training for this month and it's really hard for me to do everything in the game but I will try my best. I'm glad you liked the game.
Is this game sfw?
yes, for now
Ok, thx ^^
rizal park is from the philippines how did you know that location and i hope you can take to making this visual novel game i really want to know what happened next it's gonna intriguing
It's a secret
ok
But it's gonna be magical in the future updates. Sorry for the errors in the game. I'm glad you liked it
i love it
Android version when?
Will provide android version next week or probably 2 weeks.
Android version now available
fresh meat, :>
I'll make it meatier in future updates.
Still in progress. Feel free to ask questions about the game