Just keep up the good work. You can always clean up as you go. This could be a first draft if you choose to do so. But I can tell you are putting your heart into this and that's all that matters. I am hoping for some hot scenes with the bear 

Will obviously need more sprites for expressions.  I don't understand how the apron could be lewd, aside from "kiss the paw", but I find that cute?  it makes the dialogue at this part WAY too harsh out of the blue.  But of course I end up picking George, Wolves are my biggest weakness after all... (I'm so cliché with this XD).  Owch being way to harsh on him for no reason!  Yeah... need to explain more of the backstory first, especially if the characters already know each other, don't keep things at face value unless they have only just met.  All around the interactions just seem lame because of these things, it feels off and unnatural.  Need more descriptions of what hey se, think, and do.  This includes their surroundings, and not just the characters.  No coordination or teamwork??? Not even any details on the game or them talking during play? This is getting bland faster than breakfast!  Yeah no this has gotten to the point of beyond stupid... no logic or emotion, no feeling.  The drama is way too forced that it misses the mark by a mile. *sigh* There is a lot you need to rewrite/edit/add...